North Middle School

A direct quotation should not:

A direct quotation should:

contain a simple idea that a writer could easily paraphrase

contain a complex idea that is thought-provoking

repeat an idea that has already been said

add another layer of depth to the writing

stand alone

be smoothly embedded into the writing begin with a transition and lead-in

be lengthy

be no more than three lines

Element

Definition / Purpose

Example

Transition

Use as a bridge to link ideas and strengthen cohesion and fluency.

Early in the story, Mulan reveals her fears when she sings, “Now I see, that if I were truly to be myself, I would break my family’s heart.”

Lead-in

Use to set the context for the information in the quote (complex sentences work well).

Early in the story, Mulan reveals her fears when she sings, “Now I see, that if I were truly to be myself, I would break my family’s heart.”

Quote

Use ideas from a credible source to strengthen your ideas, illustrate a point, and/or support your controlling idea.

Early in the story, Mulan reveals her fears when she sings, “Now I see, that if I were truly to be myself, I would break my family’s heart.”

Citation*

Include author’s last name and page number to give credit to the author and to make your writing credible to the reader.

*Use citation expectations set forth by your teacher.

Early in the story, Mulan reveals her fears when she sings, “Now I see, that if I were truly to be myself, I would break my family’s heart” (Mulan 5).